Comments for Authortrek short stories http://authortrek.com/short-stories Who will be the Authortrek Writer of the Month? Fri, 23 Dec 2011 11:41:38 -0800 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 Comment on Fifty-Six When by Max Wallis by Have a Bugged Christmas | Bugged http://authortrek.com/short-stories/2010/09/01/fifty-six-when/comment-page-1/#comment-17643 Have a Bugged Christmas | Bugged Fri, 23 Dec 2011 11:41:38 +0000 http://authortrek.com/short-stories/2010/09/01/#comment-17643 [...] workshops, and has published another as a teaching resource. Max Wallis has had his published on Authortrek;  Liz Loxley’s redraft appeared in the Daily Mirror blog after being selected by Carol Ann [...] [...] workshops, and has published another as a teaching resource. Max Wallis has had his published on Authortrek;  Liz Loxley’s redraft appeared in the Daily Mirror blog after being selected by Carol Ann [...]

]]> Comment on Across a Crowded Train by Neil Gupta by Shell Chandra http://authortrek.com/short-stories/2011/07/02/across-a-crowded-train-by-neil-gupta/comment-page-1/#comment-13313 Shell Chandra Sat, 16 Jul 2011 22:30:40 +0000 http://authortrek.com/short-stories/2011/07/02/#comment-13313 Hey Neil, very enjoyable short story! Suits me as no time to read anything too long. Ninj at ball tonight and kids in bed, need more material ..... well done!!! Hey Neil, very enjoyable short story! Suits me as no time to read anything too long. Ninj at ball tonight and kids in bed, need more material ….. well done!!!

]]> Comment on A Knowing Look by Rebecca Emin by Rebecca Emin | Punked Books http://authortrek.com/short-stories/2010/08/22/a-knowing-look-by-rebecca-emin/comment-page-1/#comment-12891 Rebecca Emin | Punked Books Wed, 29 Jun 2011 16:16:15 +0000 http://authortrek.com/short-stories/2010/08/22/#comment-12891 [...] Dreams Come True A Knowing Look Read more from Authors, Fiction, Grimoire Books (Children's) Click here to cancel [...] [...] Dreams Come True A Knowing Look Read more from Authors, Fiction, Grimoire Books (Children's) Click here to cancel [...]

]]> Comment on When Dreams Come True: The School Trip By Rebecca Emin by Rebecca Emin | Punked Books http://authortrek.com/short-stories/2011/02/02/when-dreams-come-true-the-school-trip-by-rebecca-emin/comment-page-1/#comment-12890 Rebecca Emin | Punked Books Wed, 29 Jun 2011 16:09:58 +0000 http://authortrek.com/short-stories/2011/02/02/#comment-12890 [...] When Dreams Come True A Knowing Look Read more from Authors, Fiction, Grimoire Books (Children's) Click here to cancel reply. [...] [...] When Dreams Come True A Knowing Look Read more from Authors, Fiction, Grimoire Books (Children's) Click here to cancel reply. [...]

]]> Comment on She by christine reilly http://authortrek.com/short-stories/2011/02/12/she/comment-page-1/#comment-12279 christine reilly Sat, 28 May 2011 05:21:40 +0000 http://authortrek.com/short-stories/2011/02/12/#comment-12279 lovely well composed story, lovely well composed story,

]]> Comment on The Necklace by Guy de Maupassant by Jack Heaton http://authortrek.com/short-stories/2008/07/03/the-necklace/comment-page-1/#comment-12165 Jack Heaton Sat, 21 May 2011 16:59:25 +0000 #comment-12165 Indeed, on re-reading, and then reading a summary of Guy's life, one thinks this story needs the complement of the story of The Prodigal Son. Otherwise, it is too dark--except for the brilliance of the writing itself. So there is this splendor of truth in it, "depressing" as it is. Indeed, on re-reading, and then reading a summary of Guy’s life, one thinks this story needs the complement of the story of The Prodigal Son. Otherwise, it is too dark–except for the brilliance of the writing itself. So there is this splendor of truth in it, “depressing” as it is.

]]> Comment on The Necklace by Guy de Maupassant by Jack Heaton http://authortrek.com/short-stories/2008/07/03/the-necklace/comment-page-1/#comment-12164 Jack Heaton Sat, 21 May 2011 15:49:25 +0000 #comment-12164 Like the elder son in the story of the Prodigal--one cannot fathom the cost! For what! For something (or someone) worthless! Down deep the "The Necklace" is about the pure gift of grace. Something "beautiful in itself." Or, if you will, "something beautiful for God." The writer has made a very humble offering; and the reader humbly accepts this magnificent little gift of--"The Necklace." Like the elder son in the story of the Prodigal–one cannot fathom the cost! For what! For something (or someone) worthless! Down deep the “The Necklace” is about the pure gift of grace. Something “beautiful in itself.” Or, if you will, “something beautiful for God.” The writer has made a very humble offering; and the reader humbly accepts this magnificent little gift of–”The Necklace.”

]]> Comment on First Date by Srividya Chandrasekar by Srividya Chandrasekar http://authortrek.com/short-stories/2010/08/14/first-date/comment-page-1/#comment-11782 Srividya Chandrasekar Thu, 28 Apr 2011 13:35:44 +0000 http://authortrek.com/short-stories/2010/08/14/#comment-11782 Thank you .... Thank you ….

]]> Comment on The Naming Ceremony by Srividya Chandrasekar by Srividya Chandrasekar http://authortrek.com/short-stories/2010/07/02/the-naming-ceremony/comment-page-1/#comment-11781 Srividya Chandrasekar Thu, 28 Apr 2011 13:34:47 +0000 http://authortrek.com/short-stories/?p=660#comment-11781 Thank you for commenting :).. I'll work on your suggestions! Thank you for commenting :) .. I’ll work on your suggestions!

]]> Comment on Lucky by Neil Gupta by Yogesh Bhat http://authortrek.com/short-stories/2011/04/04/lucky-by-neil-gupta/comment-page-1/#comment-11777 Yogesh Bhat Thu, 28 Apr 2011 08:03:59 +0000 http://authortrek.com/short-stories/2011/04/04/#comment-11777 Mate - most enjoyable story, well done! A perfect diversion in between patients! Mate – most enjoyable story, well done!
A perfect diversion in between patients!

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